Neat stuff! I like the idea. Initially I wasn't sure what the white dots were, they're supposed to represent a fly or a bee right? It would make more sense if you put an actual bug in there rather than the dots. I like the idea of a bee, bright yellow, shows up on screen. Could see things even easier if you zoom that camera in a bit - the character is really small in screen.
Something more like this - https://www.dropbox.com/s/cmgzmtkhrs3e5nt/1.png?dl=0
Having a bee in there might change your acting a bit, though. I think it would be funny if he wakes up, realizes its a bee, and freaks out - standing up, swatting at the bee, maybe falling over...lol. That might be too much though. We'll see what Neth has to say.
Neat stuff! I like the idea. Initially I wasn't sure what the white dots were, they're supposed to represent a fly or a bee right? It would make more sense if you put an actual bug in there rather than the dots. I like the idea of a bee, bright yellow, shows up on screen. Could see things even easier if you zoom that camera in a bit - the character is really small in screen.
ReplyDeleteSomething more like this - https://www.dropbox.com/s/cmgzmtkhrs3e5nt/1.png?dl=0
Having a bee in there might change your acting a bit, though. I think it would be funny if he wakes up, realizes its a bee, and freaks out - standing up, swatting at the bee, maybe falling over...lol. That might be too much though. We'll see what Neth has to say.
Nice stuff :)