Nice! I think it will be cooler if you set up the scene a little. Like why is there a trap on the floor? Does he see the trap at first and then he decides to jump over it? Or he just didn't know it was there? The reason for him to jump over the trap will effects the way he jump and I think it would be really interesting after you add in all those aspect. Keep it up! :D
Looking good. I agree with Yee that the storytelling elements could be improved. Animation-wise, however, I like the breakdowns you have included during the jump and the settle with the hands touching the floor. The stretch pose during the jump could definitely be pushed. Right now it seems as though he is taunting the trap by jumping over it very leisurely. Nice work so far!
Nice! I think it will be cooler if you set up the scene a little. Like why is there a trap on the floor? Does he see the trap at first and then he decides to jump over it? Or he just didn't know it was there? The reason for him to jump over the trap will effects the way he jump and I think it would be really interesting after you add in all those aspect. Keep it up! :D
ReplyDeleteLooking good. I agree with Yee that the storytelling elements could be improved. Animation-wise, however, I like the breakdowns you have included during the jump and the settle with the hands touching the floor. The stretch pose during the jump could definitely be pushed. Right now it seems as though he is taunting the trap by jumping over it very leisurely. Nice work so far!
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