Nice blocking pass. The poses are easily read especially for the story you have incorporated. My suggestion would be to have the body go into a reverse c-shape around frame 75 in order to give a better line of action and a better suggestion of force/weight of the character lifting himself up (the head could also look forward which would accentuate the overall line of action and the story too, but this is up to you). Also, I love the rocking back in anticipation to the stand. This is a very nice touch. Good work!
Nice blocking pass. The poses are easily read especially for the story you have incorporated. My suggestion would be to have the body go into a reverse c-shape around frame 75 in order to give a better line of action and a better suggestion of force/weight of the character lifting himself up (the head could also look forward which would accentuate the overall line of action and the story too, but this is up to you). Also, I love the rocking back in anticipation to the stand. This is a very nice touch. Good work!
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